Title: Curly Brown Hair Note: This is an original thing I wrote while listening to Katy Perry's "Thinking of You". It's dedicated to a boy (obviously) who was pretty much my whole life for about a year. I apologize if it doesn't make much sense becuase I wrote it freely, which means it's not edited. Also posted in freewriters Please feel free to comment and tell me what you think...

Today has been pretty decent.  It consisted of: An extra super-duper yummerlicious fruit salad Listening to The Fray (although, or perhaps because most of their songs sound the same, I can really chill out to them) That awesome Japanese place in Subi Thinking about flying, talking about flying, reading about flying Listening to awesome music in my car Organising to catch up with Bec for dinner...

I can sort of understand why I don't like my poetry as it is, but most of the LJ writing communities only kind of pussyfoot around criticism and I was hoping I could hear some thoughts and suggestions from other people.  After all, I wrote the shit :P so my understanding is naturally limited. So, I'll be posting various poems that I originally posted in the  freewriters  community. Number...