So some of you might remember the epic fail that was my attempt  at a comic page for Noodle St a while back, SO, disregard that page entirely! I've cut that sequence out and started from a different area, and I would really like some opinions or constructive crit as you will probably deem necessary etc etc. It took me about an hour to draw all up and about four hours to scan and lineart and colour etc etc. It was mainly the first panel that gave me the most trouble, stupid lighting. ANYWAY. Comments are greatly appreciated :D

Also, yes the page itself is very slim compared to the norm, but I find it easier to map out that way, though I'll work on fitting more panels in or whatever. It does seem however that the art of comic drawing will forever evade me :(


EDIT:   Also! I have saved up more money than I expected for tomorow, Manga buying for the win!