Story Or Series Title: The Invader of my Heart
Culprit Author's Name: love-hope777

Full Name (plus titles if any): Raven
Full Species(es): Gothitina Sue
Hair Color (include adjectives): Raven
Eye Color (include adjectives): Purple
Unusual Markings/Colorations: Gothic.
Special Possessions (if any): None/

Annoying Origin: Abandoned by parents, lived on the streets, taken in by an OC, is now in school.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Falls for Zim.
Annoying Special Abilities: None.
Other Annoying Traits: It's our FIRST You-sue! :) It's also got, hands down, the WORST writing I've ever seen.
Link: http://www.quizilla.com/stories/2471188/the-invader-of-my-heart-invader-zim
Note: It will make your eyes bleed.

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:


Zim growled,and glared at you one last time.(Your thoughts:So his name is Zim.What a werid dude.End of thoughts)*At recess*You were sitting on a bench reading a manga when Jack showed up.Jack:What did you say to that green kid?You:I said 'At least I'm not green'.You answered not taking your eyes off the manga.Jack:You know that big-headed kid I sit next to?Well his name is Dib and he thinks Zim is a alien.You:Sure does look like one.Jack:Yeah well I told him that was cool,and he seemed happy that someone beleievd him.You:Do you?Jack thought for a moment.Jack:Not really,but you know I like the supernatrual.Voice:Hey Jack!You and Jack looked up to see Dib.Jack:Hi Dib!Hey this is Raven!Dib smiled and put out a hand.Dib:Hi my name is Dib.You shook his hand and smiled.You:It's nice to meet you.Dib:I guess you saw Zim already?He pionted to Zim who was getting hit by the kids who were throwing rubber balls at him.Zim:I AM ZIM!You:Yes.Dib:You know he's really a alien!You:So I have heard.Dib's eyes sparkled.Dib:You mean you believe me?You didn't want to dissapiont him so you gave him the answer he wanted to hear.You:Um...sure.Dib:Great we can become a team and stop Zim from destroying Earth!!!Kid:Your crazy!The bell rings.Jack jumped up and down.Jack:YAY!It's lunch time!You rolled your eyes as you went your way to the cafeteria.*At the cafeteria*You looked down at the food,it was disgusting!You:I knew I should've made my own lunch.You looked up at Jack who was stuffing his face.You:Now that's just sick.Jack:Heh,seems you and that Zim have something in common.You raised an eyebrow.You:What do mean?Jack grinned.Jack:Well,he's been sniffing and picking at his food.You looked to Zim who was sitting by himself looking at his food disgustedly.You:I don't blame him.Jack's grin grew wider.Jack:And he's been glancing at you for a little while.You glared.You:Why are you watching him anyway?!Jack:Zim likes you!You:Shut the hell up!We don't even know eacthother!Jack:Raven and Zim sitting in a tree!K-I-S-S-I-N-G!Frist comes love then comes marrige then come green kids in a baby carrige!You:That's it!You picked up a muffin and threw it,but Jack quickly ducked,so it hit Zim's head.You:Oops.Zim angrly grabed the muffin.Zim:WHO DARES SOIL MY NORAML BOY HEAD WITH THIS...PORK COW!?Kid:That's a stinking muffin!Zim:SILENCE!WHO DID IT!You started to become very annoyed with his yelling so you confessed.You:Shut up already!I threw but I was trying to hit...you were cut off when Zim was standing on top of your table.Zim:YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS FILTHY HUMAN!SLEEP PEACEFULLY NOW FOR IT WILL BE THE LAST PEACEFUL MOMENT YOU WILL EVER KNOW!You:But I'm not sleeping.Zim twicthed an eye,all the kids were stareing at him,and he jumped off the table and screamed all the way out of the cafeteria.You glared at Jack.You:Wait ago Jack.Jack smiled again.Jack:AWWW I think he really does like you.You:Just shut up!AND I'M ENDING IT HERE!!!I HOPED YOU ALL LIKED IT!RATE AND MESSAGE ME!!!