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..., I wasn't so keen on the use of this, but the more I read it, the more I like that about it. The play between distance and contiguity is actually quite effective. Not to sound too workshoppy, but the first and last paragraphs are the strongest, and carry the story through some gruesome imagery without making it feel gory. My favorite poems (I think I'm repeating myself) are short and carry the ...
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