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New Moon Aside: The Alternate Universe (Part II)... is being a lot more decisive and practical here than he is in New Moon , telling her that he’s going to tow her to shore and to stay... as she always does. And she shouldn’t. Here’s my version of the same paragraph. Same content, but expressed differently: I opened... the sea, the second that the waves covered my face, I would start screaming. Even as the water poured down my throat... http://community.livejournal.com/das_sporking/148749.html Published: 11 months, 4 weeks ago (Sat, 26 Feb 2011 23:24:15 PST); 34 Kb New Moon Aside: Jacob Black (Part I)...: Welcome to the Recap of Twilight and New Moon from Jacob’s Point of View. We start, as usual, with a note... brief. I tried to make it shorter, but…well, see for yourself. We start with a description of Jacob—happy guy with friends... to be involved. And I’m going to delete Meyer’s long, long paragraph about how upset Jacob is and how he walks to Bella’s place.... Dwell on that. At this point the telepathy kicks in and the other werewolves start explaining to Brain Freeze Jacob what has happened... http://community.livejournal.com/das_sporking/148180.html Published: 12 months ago (Thu, 24 Feb 2011 16:57:17 PST); 41 Kb Post Pictures:
New Moon Aside: Scholarship (Part II)...January 25, 2006 . At this point, things start going from “this makes no sense” to “welcome to Pleasantville.” Because I ...how to spell the word “accept.” I also think that he’d remember from one paragraph to another that he worked for a trust rather than a corporation. ... I, on the other hand, am not sure if Esme is cementing in a new window—which is stupid, as she’s not a professional ... http://community.livejournal.com/das_sporking/147097.html Published: 1 year ago (Mon, 21 Feb 2011 09:39:32 PST); 25 Kb Post Pictures:
New Moon: Chapter 19 - Race (Part II)... that I haven’t already said? I mean, the only thing new to the table I could bring up is, “If you aren’t planning on surviving... that repeat was pretty spot-on, don’t you think? May as well start with the counts—easy to get those out of the way. DEAD... serious issues so lightly? And the other facet—the last paragraph. Gonna repeat it. If Alice made good... inconspicuous. Yes, because when people see a sparkling man? They will start screaming because OH MY GOD, IT’S A VAMPIRE!!! THEY’RE REAL... http://community.livejournal.com/das_sporking/138436.html Published: 1 year, 1 month ago (Fri, 31 Dec 2010 16:19:02 PST); 32 Kb Post Pictures:
New Moon: Chapter 10 - The Meadow... staring at the map and compass like a pig looking at a new gate, and then goes traipsing off into the woods. She talks... HOLE™: 18 Seriously. I’m gonna start Pauling. And then, one paragraph later, BAM, she’s in the meadow. STEPHENIE MEYER = ARIANA BLACK: 95 Not... what to say here. That’s just—that’s amazing. I don’t even know where I could possibly start. I know the easiest one to address—the part about how because a hallucination... http://community.livejournal.com/das_sporking/122848.html Published: 1 year, 5 months ago (Fri, 17 Sep 2010 15:56:01 PDT); 56 Kb Post Pictures:
New Moon: Chapter 4 - Waking Up (Part II)... work in first person POV. The second paragraph. You didn’t think about it, huh? Well, you obviously are, seeing...…yeah, Bella. She will. Know why? Because when people start eagerly asking all about a situation, THEY ARE DISPLAYING INTEREST... zombies as well. So. Bella runs outside and continues to start beating us over the head and Meyer once... now. I’m afraid I burnt it out with my rage up there. As such, I’ll just start up the new count. The IMAGINARY EDWARD count... http://community.livejournal.com/das_sporking/117663.html Published: 1 year, 5 months ago (Wed, 01 Sep 2010 17:45:36 PDT); 40 Kb Post Pictures:
i'm new to thisand i don't know how the hell to work this. i've had this account for a while and never bothered with it. only bothering now for my icons. even though no one will prolly read this, pls take care of me~ i'm too lazy to type up a paragraph about myself so i'll just round it off: i'm hais and i'm a sixteen year old british born chinese female who's about to start college soon /o/ http://eatmymagnum.livejournal.com/488.html Published: 1 year, 5 months ago (Tue, 31 Aug 2010 18:49:30 PDT); 395 bytes New Moon: Chapter 3 - The End (Part II)... photoshoot and heads for school. “ I tried to concentrate on my new project rather than the fact that Edward apparently... much immediately after the “camera war”, judging by this paragraph that quickly follows lunch. After school... off oh, what, a day ago? A few days? I don’t want to start screaming this early into the review, so I’ll just ask...! You can have my soul. I don't want it without you — it's yours already! ” …Wow. That’s a whole new low of pathetic. Anyway, Edward finally... http://community.livejournal.com/das_sporking/116380.html Published: 1 year, 5 months ago (Mon, 30 Aug 2010 23:37:26 PDT); 38 Kb Post Pictures:
A Paragraph With The Mariners - 73... outs. I'm not gonna lie to you, Detroit and New York might have the best offenses in baseball... on the damned MOON for crying out loud? You got me. His next start, should he still be around, will be this Friday against the Yankees... http://newyorksteve.livejournal.com/254251.html Published: 1 year, 7 months ago (Mon, 05 Jul 2010 08:58:09 PDT); 1138 bytes A Paragraph With The Mariners - 71.... One might argue that as the season progresses and the days start heating up, Felix gets better and better... lineups we've faced this year - AND - it's the storied Yankees - AND - it was in New York - AND - it was the day after Cliff Lee... http://newyorksteve.livejournal.com/253652.html Published: 1 year, 7 months ago (Thu, 01 Jul 2010 06:58:11 PDT); 1233 bytes |
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