COMMENTARY- OotB Ch 1

... in their silent communication as Adama observed the wheels spinning in the President’s mind. “Is it even possible to hide all of our citizens on these planets?” One thing I noticed… THERE ARE WAY TOO MANY SILENCES IN THIS FIC. WTF self? “Madam President?” Lee asked, his attention suddenly snapped back into the circle. “You said it yourself, Mr. Adama. This is the end of the line. This is ...

46 - ferinough

...a fond smirk. "Nothing we don't already know from experience," Nino reminded with a raised eyebrow, one that never meant good things, but occasionally meant better-than-good things. Sho noticed that sudden silences were frequent, but not as awkward as they maybe should have been. Driving on the open road, whether there was a destination or a goal of aimlessness (in this case the former, but then...

~quiet fire~

...the talking to strangers, through the making new friends, through the beer-tastings and propane balloons. I felt her when I put my feet on the ground. I felt her when I walked. I felt her in the silences between stories. She sat in my skin and got comfortable. And for once, I wasn't terrified, wondering how people were responding to the way I was presenting myself to them. I didn't have to worry ...

Look in My Tormented Eye (4/9)

...so that's where it went. Gabriel gave him a kind look and then resumed the study of his footwear. Sam munched a few fries, trying not to feel a knot of unease in his chest. Sometimes silences were easy, like the passing of the Kansas countryside set to good music. Sometimes they screamed with an agony that pierced the skin, that hurt all the more precisely because there was no easy wound to sew ...

FIC: The worst of the truths are behind us. (chris pine/zq, r)

... there too, all cool and relaxed just like Zach. Chris could just imagine how not -cool and relaxed he was going to be, and he could feel his muscles tensing just from thinking about all the uncomfortable silences he and Zach would have to try to avoid. Except, when he walked in, Zach was all, "Hey man," like at no point in their acquaintance were penises involved. Which was a game Chris could ...

Gift for Bgreenwivy

... better than we do." "She'd just tell me to be nicer or something." Harry bit his lip. He thought perhaps Ron could stand to be a bit nicer to Mandy, but he wasn't about say so. "You know, your silences say a lot, mate," said Ron. "Well," Harry began awkwardly. "It's just that girls are a bit weird, Ron. They don't normally go in for the things that make us laugh." Ron sighed. "You didn't ...

... him as if trying to read him in some way and replied "Oh, I'm here covering Jennifer for a moment, she's in the supply closet" the awkwardness of their relationship haven't vanished neither the uncomfortable silences or the lack of topic in the conversations. He sighed again, putting both hands on the counter and added " Uh... I wanted to now if you don't mind...if i stay with you and talk..?" he...

I don't know why but I got a sudden flashback. Remember when we first met? I remember... awkward silences, liking shoes, a picnic in the rain, cake filling, wearing a scarf, a bottle of vodka, my favourite song, grapes, stories about everyone, eye contact, butterflies, quick kisses, blue lights, wrong numbers, jealous friends, hands held under the sheets, neck kisses, walking the wrong way ...

Evolution, it's what's for dinner

...joke, math, chemistry, once I found this dead iguana in the ventilation of our school I really didn’t like that, people who act like they have never lied (because, really, you’ve never lied?), awkward silences… Talents: Editing and creating films (I am in a broadcast class and I really do think I have some serious skillz), Cooking (but in the more practical sense, as in, if you need to make ...

Fic: The life behind the silences (Giles/Xander) (1/2)

Title: The life behind the silences Author: davinci_1985 Fandom: BTVS Rating: R? Length: 11300+ Notes: Mylène challenged me: to write a ...had been watching most intently from, apparently, quite a while before he came home. The life behind the silences Xander’ eyes were black and unfocused, and his fingers kept running up and down the bottle of water,...