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... reports, like we're not sure if they exist or not. I would make that sentence: "Lastly, there are unfortunately a variety of "spam" emails that reference LiveJournal accounts, but these emails are not authorized or ... or responses to a Support request you opened." -- that's a really long sentence, and I'm not sure a semicolon followed by 'nor' is all that ...

Curious Nautical Idiom

... at which we were marvellously startled for we never expected anyone to be near about us." Now one talks quite naturally, in a variety of languages, about a ship putting out a boat (or calling into port, or sending a message, or much else besides), ... the boat that makes its way over to the other ship, and the people inside that boat who call out. Or perhaps this sentence would not make you pause?

DUN DUN DUN. THE SEQUEL.

... donghae. Sungmin stood up and placed an arm around Ryeowook. REPETITIVE, NO VARIETY? “Calm down, Wookie. Don’t get so worked up. That’s not ... there’s a distance. HOW MANY DISTANCES DO YOU NEED IN A SENTENCE! Tears came to Donghae’s eyes. (change in point of view,... and fell. She smiled laughed her fucking ass off (I NEED VARIETY) . “Yes. Yes I will marry you.” Eunhyuk smiled and placed the ...

this sudden burst of sunlight [closed/complete]

... preferred the taste of it to many of the modern drinks. Still, it never hurt to add a little variety into his drinking line up. "I am amazed at all of the different drinks they have. It's no ... little girl and not a woman to be envious of. "Oh I think-" She didn't finish her sentence. Whenever he kissed her, Helen felt submerged in him- everything else seemed to matter little. "I can see that ...

Inertia or Law(s) of Motion 8/8

... of the corner of his eyes and lapped his tongue across his lips when he got to the end of a sentence. His eyebrow was curious and he was leaning down to kiss him—awkward as it was all at bad angles. .... But he rolled his eyes like forgiving him. “Yeah—well, now you know that I like sex in a variety of ways.” So he nodded. “Now I know.” What a thing to know and maybe his brain started thinking of...

Fic (S/X): Out of the Bag

.../Squicks: Badgers will eat your brain!!!!!!!! Or not. Summary: Fluff, of the schmoopy, diabetic-coma inducing variety. Xander gets hurt, Spike is, well, Spike, and Buffy… deals. For the Mys’ sweet put-upon... or maybe that should be her brain’s mouth- ack! It was too early for this kind of sentence) stay the night. Grudgingly, Spike had agreed, saying, ‘It wouldn’t do to wake the boy anyway.’ So...

RP log: Ohtori Choutarou and Oishi Shuichiro

... back." He took a drink of tea to calm himself down, thinking over the rest of Oishi's sentence. Lessons in the village? Even if they found a decent teacher, that was forty-five minutes there and back,...to know." Oishi attempted to spin his pen through his fingers as he had seen Eiji do with a variety of objects that found their way into his hands. The ballpoint slid through his grasp and onto the ...

...be punctuating dialogue correctly, and your sentence structure is readable. So there's...Department of Redundancy Department approves this sentence. Again, Lovecraft was given to rambling...words within reason. You have functional sentence structure, which is a big step...generally more appropriate for a sentence. Some variety is nice, but dancing ... It's really the second sentence that slams it home. Good ...

HP fic: The Way To a Man’s Heart for hd_career_fair (Part 1/3)

... prompt and turned the confectionery into a posh restaurant. It’s still about food, only with a larger variety. I didn’t make the R-rating either. I’ve come to offer plot and mad science instead....They had a reference to a similar case.” Harry was still busy catching the meaning of her first sentence. “Human? You mean ...” “I mean whoever made that batch of shepherd’s pie used beef, rat and wizard...

My Take 5 Proposal

... I developed socially and gained self-confidence through a variety of enriching experiences, academically the selection was limited to ... will also teach me how the information in the sentence interacts with the structure, or syntax, of the sentence. This will be a key point in my study: where the ... remain the same, and the syntax of the sentence and the dance routine changes. Through these courses, ...