shiori's "oh so modern jezebel"

... the aesthetic value of this layout. We would prefer to see some borders on the images and some spacing between the images/text, but that isn't really a big deal, just a thought. Otherwise, everything ... The comma should be a period to separate two sentences, otherwise it's a rather long run-on sentence. From here : All Kitajima can can do There's an extra "can". The one point taken off is ...

Nathan Fillion!

... Kate came to check in on Castle, she found him sitting upright, looking out the window. The above spacing is exactly how it is in the story. No section space, line break, group of asterisks or anything, ... how the words hadn’t helped much once she said them. No, they didn't help, because that sentence doesn't make sense. Castle hears the word "vacation" and tells her she should go to Fiji. ...

Longing for love (2/?)

...only mean one thing:” “It could serve as your mirror,” Yoochun finished Junsu’s sentence. Both of them looked at each other and grinned. Jaejoong only pouted; he was...confused. If Jaejoong was so into girls, then why did Jaejoong spend half of his time spacing out? “He started spacing out right after that incident.” Junsu shook his head in amusement as he retold the events of yesterday. Changmin...

The reason to dance (Chapter 7)

..., after that embarrassing message. Donghae stared at his phone in shock, his mind unable to process the last sentence he just saw. He read it, again and again, jolting his mind from the numbness that had threatened to ...I don't know... Whenever I am around him, I want to speak to him. Whenever I see him spacing out and glancing out of the window, bored or sad, I want to go over and cheer him up...

pen and paper vs. digital

... one exception, since I liked the freedom that writing on paper gives for organizing ones thoughts - arrows, spacing, little notes, etc. In my journaling history, I flirted with a paper journal throughout elementary and ... bottom of one page and turn to the next, and the finality of punctuating the last sentence, putting the pen down, and closing the notebook / journal. There are times I miss it (...

All Good Things (A "Day Off Day" Series Continuation)

... toward an unoccupied room. "Yeah. Yeah, that'd be..." Kris can't find a way to finish the sentence, so he leaves it undone, ghosting in the air behind him as he follows Adam. The stale air tastes ...Katy didn't make a demand like that. Adam's looking at Kris expectantly. Which is what Kris gets for spacing out and letting his thoughts get the better of him. "Um, well, not- not really. I mean, ...

Life: Served Two Ways 4/5, NC-17, Jared/Jensen

... Hamlet and its symbolism. AP, possible college credit, and they’re using large margins, extended character spacing and bigger fonts to fill the space. He shoved them into his bag and headed home, changing... knowing that they might get into college because their entrance essays weren’t a single run on sentence with bad grammar. That didn’t suck either.” He could feel Jensen staring at him. “What?”...

...amazing words, it was just a perfect one page and a half (3 pages probably, after double spacing it) I just couldn't do it. I'm going to drop the class. I hate ... In the science of turning herbs into happiness, I don't have a complete thought for this sentence however that phrase that starts this sentence sounded so cool I had to write it. Not that this gets read by anyone. But I type it because I ...

[fic] nosce te ipsum (4/6ish)

..., him. Alone. Sammy alone, Left Behind and waiting. It was friggin' torture , an indeterminate prison sentence eased only by the rumble of the Impala's return, by a flash of headlights across the ..., since they left the diner. There had been a lengthy discussion involving the dangers of Dean spacing out while at the wheel and Castiel admitting that while he understood the basic mechanics of the ...

Falling Slowly-Chapter 4

... over him was the right thing to do anyway. “Because I don’t like the guy. ” I finished my sentence.   “I guess.” Celine shrugged.   “But he’s really nice. He has a charming smile, too. I just hate it...see him again? Is it possible?   I wondered as Mark came home with the groceries. He saw me spacing out and made him question me, “ Odessa , are you okay?”   “Y-Yeah, I’m ...