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...tone of the work. Also, I'm trying to do a decent job with characterization here, where everyone's just.. human. No one is supposed... unfinished beer, which Die had gestured accusingly at, then reached out to snag it from across the table. He set it next to his own.... do at the moment but drink his water, wait for practice to resume, he glanced around, letting his eyes travel the room slowly. It was ...

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